by HeyAll
Loved your story and you had me getting hotter on every word.. I want to be Tina. I need it
Why not turn it into a series? You are a good writer and this has potential to be a good long story.
I really enjoyed reading this. It was very well written. I am a submissive male and it was very easy to imagine myself in her situation. I too would like to see this story develop further. Please keep up the good work.
This would be lovely as a series. You have certainly set up the possibility and your writing is wonderful. Keep up the great work!
Great story. I just hope you turn this into a series and keep this great story going. Really enjoyed reading this. Please continue
Agree that it would be good as a series....this episode ended too abruptly
The story has perfect timing in every aspect. As said by other members the story has simple ending. Can be formed as Series but at same time author has exposed only the initiative stage of Tina's lifestyle and how she enjoys being g submissive further.
Thanks for a lovely story. Will look fwd to have other stories from this author.
Beautifully paced and excellent word use. But still not my cup of tea, I occasionally try to read something that is outside of my 'fetish' comfort zone because I believe it can help me understand others. But even after reading several BDSM stories they still leave me feeling confused about how someone can accept sex with total strangers as arousing. I still give you 4 stars because the writing deserves it.
I want to be her. Secretly. I would never have removed the blindfold. omg. You reached into my deepest darkest desires.
I found the whole story very erotic. The build up was superb and the ending was outstanding. It is one of my fantasies to be used, at a gathering, the way Tina was used. Thank you for a pleasurable story. I hope there will be a sequel.