All Comments on 'The Council Ch. 16'

I LOVED IT!!! Honestly, I stayed up to wait for this chapter. LOL! I couldn't sleep til I knew what happened after the fight. Jaz, you are truly a master writer! Thank you so much for sharing and I say, You've earned your break. Yay for Everyone!! Oh, and I hope Freya ends up w/Dayton.. lol!

It was so worth it!!!! Great writing!

was dying for it.. n yaaayy!! another chapter

really great work.. please continue sharing this precious gift with us:)

That was so intense! It adds a whole new meaning to "love hurts."

i figured Cedar was going to try something rash, but i do love the way that Alexei was brought face to face with their situation. Another excellent chapter as usual, although i will admit to being disappointed that Loretta and Andrei weren't mentioned. Good work, keep it coming!!!

improve upon perfection! There were so many tearful moments in this. Ashleigh and Nors, Rafe finally coming to terms, and heartbreakingly Cedar and Alexei. For a moment there I though he actually wasn't going to do it but you wrote it so incredibly well. I can't wait for the next one!!! Well done Jaz!!

Superb!! You could have given us a short chapter and ended at the end of page 1 - it was a natural stopping point right there, but NO! you gave us three more well written drama filled pages.

Can't wait to see how the Wamps (Were-Vampire) kids turn out.

This chapter is great and well worth waiting for.

This story has me hooked and I cannot wait to read the next chapter.

Keep up the good work.

The things we do to feel complete hey? Alexei must be a mess shame. Fantastic chapter! I love the idea of a were-vamp pack. Really exciting. . And I just loved Demitri's reaction to joining lol (although I love everything that vamp does and says *grin*). Is this really your last sequel? I was thinking about a story for Freya and the lost Alexander brother. One can hope right? Great chapter!

JAZ IS A TRUE GODDESS!!! You and your wonderful story require much love.

Brilliant,gut wrenching,engrossing it had me glued to the screen I was so glad my hubby had gone to bed there was no way I was going to be interupted while reading this wonderful chapter. Good thing I had the tissues handy! Sniff. The only complaint I have is that I have to wait so long for the next chapter who knew that a week would seem like forever when your waiting for a Jaz chapter to be posted!

Jaz i have no way of expressing how great this chapter was. I am speechless will have to think on this every description i come up with seems to pale by comparison thank you

now it is another week till next chapter .never thought a week would seem so long lol

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Swear you are amazing I'm glad the wait was soo worth it. The way you convey these complex emotions is awesome.

I know you said this was your last chapter, but it's probably going to have to be extra long just to fit in Freya finding a mate, maybe... Dayton Alexander?

Favourite chapter so far :)

My, oh my you are AMAZING at telling this love affair of vampires and wolves. I'm speechless! I missed Andrei and Loretta in this chapter though. I agree that Freya would be a wild pair for the lonesome Alexander wolf. I hope that will be your next story unfolding.

Thank you for making my Wednesday mornings PERFECT!

...is thank you.

That almost made rethink which was my favorite Wonder Twin couple. That was AWESOME! Nors and Ash too--I don't think I realized how strong she is, her being so young and going through so much.

I can't wait for the babies!

As for Freya, I hope Dayton is up to it, cause it's going to take a lot of love and patience to heal her.

Great chapter as usual, MEJ. While we all wait anxiously for the final chapter, PLEASE don't rush it. Take as long as you need to finish it to your satisfaction.

May the Muses be your co-pilot,

kat

Fantastic.....................

Whether I was worried about when Ash might wake, sad that Nors was blaming himself, or surprised that Freva would come to love Ash, all that emotion in just the first part. There was fear for Rafe and his new pack, excitement over Rhianna getting Caleb to joint the pack. And the hurt of both Cedar and Alexei as they argued about mating. And finally the sheer agony of Alexei and the pain of Cedar was almost to much. Had they not loved each other so.........

Your story just keeps getting better, and BETTER! LOVE your writing, wonderful job. Thank you, again for your skills. Bravo!!

Thanks for your hard work providing a group of characters that the readers really care about.

i want to let you know you kept me awake until early morning coz i cannot sleep without knowing what happened. hahahaha.

you did it again girl! what a fantastic chapter. now i want to know who is the were/vampire for freya. :) hmmmm...interesting... :)

well can't really add anything to what is said before. you can't improve something that's already perfect!

TC is so emotional on so many levels, simply takes your breath away, even after reading it a few times.

Jazz, I've run out of words that offer praise. What I can tell you is that you made my day. This was just what I needed after the day I've been having, words also fail to describe it.

I really hope you never stop writing(of course take a break once in a while) because you are that good.

I was figuring ceader would have issues with her own nature and would take matters into her hands. You worked that angle and being the master of suprise completely changed course. The duality you mixed into it by adding Alexei's inner war had me swallowing hard a few times. I don't know how you drag those vivid emotional responses from me but you do with regularity.

Untill next chapter I once again eagerly await.

So the ends are starting to be tied and we wait again for the official ending. The Council series has surpassed all others for emotion, action, drama, love and surprises than any other story I have read EVER! Each chapter leaves me breathless, speachless, and just in awe of our writing talents. Thankyou for sharing this with the world, but don't think you can stop here, your writing has become and addiction and I'm NOT going to rehab. I'm sure you can come up with a few (hundred) connecting stories to continue on with after this, YOU ARE NOT LEAVING US, and as usual I'm left with the one word that I'm sure your sick of hearing from me...perfect!

Hehehehehehehehehehehehehehe...it was perfectly brilliant!

Until next week, always your adoring fan and if you decide to stop writing after this series probably stalker and kidnapper (to torture you into writing again - of course)

Zooey :-)

You are simply brillant, period!

once again. This is Spoolee again. I can't even begin to describe how much I love this chapter. You're an amazing writer, and though you deserve a break when you're done with this, I hope you come back to us soon. Keep up the amazing work. I'll be here waiting for what you have for us next. :)

I was okay with Nors/Ash, I was okay with Dem/Mara but my tears came down in those last moments with Alexei/Cedar. Beautifully written, especially when he described their children - oh boy here comes the tears again!

you fool me again. I echo what all the others have said. No words left to tell you how talented you are. You deserve a break but hope it is not for very long. What will we all do without your wonderful stories. hugs, Kate

You keep astounding me with the greatness of your writing... that last scene was just awesome. I felt like I was there in this vivid picture you painted & I could see the emotions & the events. Great job yet again! Keep the stories coming... PLEASE!

you have a gift. this story was amazing. i really loved it.

I have no idea how you do it, but you make me feel for your characters. It took quite a bit of time for me to read this because I had to find another box of tissues. I was crying so much.

Looking forward to the first pack meeting at Caleb's house! Wonder how the wolpires/volves/werepirs/wamps are going to take the news. Then there is the meeting with all the vamps, I can just imagine the gasps and shocked faces when they see the weres there behind a glaring Caleb and Demetri daring them to protest!

your usual magic has closed some doors and opened others.

are you suggesting a pairing between freya and dayton? interesting.

as is the first meeting of the armand-hanlon pack.

my money's on mara persuading demetri to join too.

keep going, the end is in sight?

...as ever, I think this story is just brilliant. I'm going to go no further into the superlatives, cos I think you get far too many of those, lol ;-)

Can you see I've been doing my homework and now realise that was what I meant by platitudes?! So you've improved my vocabulary too, thank you v much!

Looking forward to the next (last, sob!) chapter

You do realise you better make it good don't you, or we might all desert you! Waiting with baited breath and the ability to turn nasty. (As if....)

Fx

.................. but it was so worth it!

This needs to be published. My Christmas reading.

Jaz, another excellent chapter. As other readers comment about the up coming meeting between the weres and the vampires. The new pack and how the twins are going to accept rafe as the alpha. And freya that there is someone special out there for her.

The next chapter should be interesting.

once the stories are done, I say submit to be published, even as a collection of short stories. Thank you again for sharing your world - I can't wait to see where this one ends.

I got so nervous that you were going to leave Cedar and Alexi's battle to continue in a different chapter. Wonderfully descriptive and as captivating as always.

WoW. I would just like to say that although all of your work seems to draw me in, The line "I don't think you'll ever truly know what that just cost me, sweetheart," actually made my heart hurt. Way to go Jaz.

I know you are taking a break after this next and last chapter. I will miss this story and hate to see it end but you do deserve a break. I know a lot of writers on here stop posting as they get busy with their lives. Please do come back from your vacation. I would so LOVE to read about Andrei's little girl when she is born and his reaction to her. Pretty please:-)

Seriously your writing is a revelation. Keep the chapters coming.. I hope you are planning to include Dayton much more in this storyline than a mention here and there.

i swear my heart hurt with the end of that chapter, esp that comment "I don't think you'll ever truly know what that just cost me, sweetheart,"...that made tears flow!! Please continue on...we love your works Jaz!! Get all these works published...I will purchase them for my own library!! I would love to read them for years to come!! Thank you for some of the best writings ever!!

Lydia

You have worked miracles with Freya. I love that she has found something to bring her back into the fold. Oh, I think she will still be a handful at times, but its like seeing what Nors and Ash have together has healed some of the coldness inside her. The fact that she "championed" Ash made me really like her. Then there was Alexie and Cedar! Holy crap! I really thought he was going to stick to his guns and she would do something rash to force his hand because of her own stubborn streak. His sudden decision to just turn her without warning totally blind sided me. I had one of those "did I just read that right" moments. LOL! I wasn't expecting it, and I think that made the whole thing that much more moving. You can talk and think all you want, but sometimes with love you just have to take a chance for someone else. That's what he did and I think you depicted that perfectly here. There are a lot of disappointments in life, but your work is never one of them. All your little touches take what is very good and make it something special. I am getting used to being pleasantly surprised by you though. :)

totally amazing story I'm in love with all your characters! I am so happy that Rafe has found his place and his mate and isn't suffering like he was in the first story. I love that Demetri no matter how hard assed seems to have a soft spot for Rhianna like Caleb does. I can't wait to see the triplets, the little girl, and other children that will be born. I agree Freya has totally turned around from a selfish ignorant bitch to someone you also cheer for too! I hope she gets her happily ever after! and bravo with Ash and Nors!

this was the best of all ur stories!!!!! i loved it!!!! plz continue

This was so unexpected and perfect!

i am not sure who it will be, but freyas getting a mate, and please please bring emily in some how, she has a story to tell, twice she has risked life and limb for the wolves and i hope she gets something out of it, and i restate my usual, when is the book getting published( and i do think it could be a series like briggs or armstrong

I soooo was not expecting anything in this chapter!!!! Holy cow!! He prison shanked her with his talons!!!!!!????? Talk about rough neck!!!!! Wow! I feel ravaged by your literature....yes I said RAVAGED!!!!! Now hurry up with the next chapter!!!!!! Your HHIC

They are my favorites. I have been waiting for this chapter for ages! I couldn't wait to see how you would write Cedar's turning and it did not disappoint. I loved Cedar's desperation and Alexei's reluctance then realization and finally tenderness. I really hope it works. I want to see their little girls too! I wish you could put Alexei in a box and send him to me. Best Christmas gift ever. :)

I can't help but feel bad for the vamp couples who can't have kids ever. Must be hard to see it become possible for them. I guess having an eternity with your soulmate would be worth it.

I see a possibility for vamps and humans to be able to become supernaturals and retain the ability to have kids. They could turn them into wolves instead of vamps and proceed with the mating.

I'd like to see Rafe become a little less maudlin all the time. I'd like to see him change as he embraces his inner Alpha. As his confidence increases maybe he'll be a happier person and more positive etc.

I feel badly for Alexei. I can't imagine how hard that was for him and I felt badly when he said it would take him centuries to recover from it. Hopefully the joy of mating with her will go a long way toward healing him. I really thought she was going to have to hurt herself. The threat of her going rogue was a good reason for him to do it. I'm wondering how Lacey will hold up as Alpha bitch when she has these strong betas in her pack. Wouldn't their wolves want to challenge her?

Do I smell another story about Freya...she's such a complex character that it would be a good one I'm sure!

Looking forward to more but not wanting it to end!

I cried. So bloody fabulous.

u are giving me a heart attack with this awesomeness of a story

dammit im crying!!!! and why wont you let me sleep????

its just so good.

It's really too bad that even though Alexei was really the first to except the whole 'mating with a Were' thing, he had the hardest time of actually doing it because he had to hurt her. Not saying the others had it easy, it's just they only had to heal, not hurt.

Love it!

I want a love like that......

...but this story is just that people....a good read. Get a grip! That is why this is called fantasy, and yet while these last two stories are NOT erotica..... Look...you CAN write your ass off , you have a rich and imaginative way of telling a story and as much of a fan as I am...I AM NOT A FANATIC! I will NOT be naming any dogs, cats, or children after your characters. You are GREAT in writing a story to pull the reader out of everyday hum drum anxiety and stress to "peep" at the universe you created. Yep! You're a God. Still, it's A STORY. Thanks for the stories....and ya'll others...get a grip and a life! /-p

nt

Even tho I work nights I still manage to be late because i'm up all night reading your stories! But to be honest I don't care. I look forward to getting home and passing the time reading your stories and listening to music. Well sort of listening to music because I get so engrossed in the tales that I tune out the songs sometimes. Please continue to write as you're one of the best writer's I've come across in a long time.

and cracking eggs to make an omelet. TK U MLJ LV NV

If your stories was a series of books, I would buy them. If your stories was a series of movies, I would go see them and then buy them on dvd. If your stories was a tv series I would plank my butt on the sofa every week and watch faithfully. You have an Amazing story writing Talent.

If your stories was a series of books, I would buy them. If your stories was a series of movies, I would go see them and then buy them on dvd. If your stories was a tv series I would plank my butt on the sofa every week and watch faithfully. You have an Amazing story writing Talent.

Your storywriting skills are incredible. I have read ALL your stories in the space of 4 days. I have had hardly any sleep but I don't care you are truely gifted that you keep me wanting more....I keep telling myself "just read one more chapter" I find myself engrossed in the characters like I know them personally. Why are you not published?

Yep, ditto Sensai....ahhhh this one is a 4. lol!!!!

I cried when Alexei had to hurt Cedar. You are such an amazing author.

Just WOW

It takes a special skill to write a scene as gruesome as this and make it romantic.