All Comments on 'The Cure Ch. 07'

I must have missed it somewhere, but when did John turn into G?? anyway, this isn't love, it lust and as i have said before, Gail will never be able to stay monogamous in any way or form, my guess is that at some point in time she will turn to swinging and then cheating unless John (G) is ok with being a cuckold and knows about it, then it isn't cheating i guess. This started out as a very loving and caring story, but sadly isn't even close to that any more.

Yum!

An erotic and romantic story. I think that Gail will sticks with G. And yes, the story is about lust and fucking, but it also is about love. My only question is Gavin. Where will he fit in now that Jen and Gail are likely to remain lovers. Will he and G share their women? There remain unanswered questions in this story as it becomes more complicated. Looking forward to more.

Awkward to read as the first person account changes twice, both times without warning. Not a typical construct. I’ve seen it done before, but usually broken in a deliberate manner such as by chapter or with a physical break (*******) and some writing technique to communicate to the reader. I’m still interested in the story and all your writings.