All Comments on 'The Ghost Inside Her'

by Brittni4u

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
I love this!

You are so well rounded as an author. I loved how you broke off and created this short masterpiece. It was erotic, suspenseful and had a couple of twists. Easily 5 stars vote from me!

legsfeettoeslegsfeettoesabout 6 years ago
Well done!

As usual, Britt, an erotic, arousing, and entertaining story. With Mary heading off to college, I have to wonder if Aunt Betsy is going to get some kind of birth control (if she doesn't already have some) and start sleeping in Mary's room and asking Horace to come in (cum in?)! Five stars!

barepussloverbarepussloverabout 6 years ago
Interesting Way To Become Prenant!

Is Aunt Betsy Next, Or Only Likes Younger Women!! :-)

RodThrustinRodThrustinabout 6 years ago
Who Ya Gonna Call?

I wondered part-way through if she was on the pill. Apparently not and she gave no thought to the complication.

Aunt Betsy should have called the Ghost Busters. They could have snared Horace in the act. I can imagine some of Bill Murray's comments about Horace the Horse.

Good story, Brittni. Different from your usual fare. Diversity is a good thing.

FOUNTAINPEN67FOUNTAINPEN67about 6 years ago
Marvelously intriguing and captivating. Five stars

Love the crossover eroticism of the supernatural mixing with the physical world. This is spellbinding stuff with all the elements of a thriller movie. Mildly disturbing in a way that will pull the reader in more ... wanting to see what happens next. You are very much in touch Brittni with your inner Stephen King. Well done!

echoqueenechoqueenabout 6 years ago

Need to get more of Horace Baxter

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
So hot

I want a monster cock ghost to force himself into my tight little cunt. I want to have his little rapists babies. Keep his legacy alive

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

As usual Brit five stars. Great piece of work 👏

NICHOLXNICHOLXover 1 year ago

LOVED IT, CINCO! Will she have a ghost baby, LOL? I hope there is a sequel!

dingusmcmingusdingusmcmingusover 1 year ago

In a story about a woman being impregnated by a ghost, the most unbelievable part is that a detective would show up to a hospital to investigate an alleged rape.

SluttyMatthewSluttyMatthew2 months ago

Hello Brittni4u

That is one crazy story!

Horace Baxter is one vindictive spirit!!

Poor Mary! How do explain to your son or daughter that his or her absent father is actually the ghost of a serial rapist!

- Slutty Matthew

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