All Comments on 'The House Husband'

but it seemed a bit rushed to me. I would've preferred more of them interacting beyond the sex, maybe put more of the background into a conversation rather than have it all up front as exposition. A bit more about the fire and who started it would be interesting as well. There's a good story in there, but it needs more telling.

rewrite or whatever to make longer

Meh, belonged more in erotic couplings, far too rushed to be considered romance.

There's a really good idea in there somewhere. Felt like the author lost interest so we never discovered why the restaurant caught fire or, crucially for me, why on earth they got married. Did she give any indication that she loved him as a person or that she had any intention of being faithful to him? How did he feel about that?

has no problems in survival in the cruel world, TK U MLJ LV NV

LOL. Liked the Story

For the read.

Sometimes stories are meant to be just a fun little read. This is one of them. I can assure you, it wasn't rushed. Nor is the cause of the fire integral to the story. It might be if I wrote about this further, but I wrote what I wrote. Some liked it and some didn't - that's the way it goes. For those who took the time to comment, thanks.

~~BrettJ

Enjoyed it!

Thx!

Might rate a sequel - what caused the fire, how does the catering go and does he keep her happy in the long run? Keep writing.

was (is) a great story

but it could also have another chapter

how was there life

the catering business

a let down at the end. What happened, between them an with either the restaurant or the catering?

Simon should have married her daughter! In 20 years she will be way over the hill at 67 and him in his early 40 forties!

Good story. Where it goes from then on only you know.