All Comments on 'The Joke's on Them'

Just had to let you know I really enjoyed this story. The characters were well detailed and liked them right off the bat. They melded well together and were very hot... Great joke on Casey the following year....

If Mark and Casey thought it would be a funny prank to set them up on a blind date, they must not have thought very highly of Travis and Juliette.

The story did a great job of introducing Mark, Casey, and Travis to us, but when Lise was mentioned I had no clue who he/she might have been. Further confusing was the relationship between Casey, Lise, and Juliette.

The story was a good one and I really felt that the characters were well developed and believable. Not only have we all had an April Fool joke backfire, I'll bet we've all had a past love we failed to recognize. Not everyone gets a second chance.

1* for using 'cunt', cannot stand that word.

if you know your brother/best friend cant stand a person why in the fuck would you set them up on a blind date no matter what day of the year it is?it says to me i dont know or give a damn about you enough to know that you have not liked a person at all in the last 30 yrs.

10 Years without a Date -eek

Shallow. Predictable

This was a well-written and absolutely entertaining tale. The nit-pickers can fuck off. A full 5 from me.

It's a fucking story! No actual human beings were harmed. Although brief, it was well told. If the word "cunt" offends you, avoid erotic literature. All you anonymous panty-waists can fuck off. Brett, I would gladly buy you a beer.

Enjoyed the story and I think many of the negative (April the 2nd.) comments come from those who have no idea what it takes to write a sentence around a topic or theme that happens once a year and in this case you stretched it into a one year anniversary. >>5

BrettJ - I enjoy your long one-pagers - tight writing and concise. You can't please all; some readers must not know this is erotic literature (or like to rant). You have pleased me and I have read almost all you have written so far. I look for your contributions and know I will NOT waste my time reading your contributions. Thanks!

- Nicely told story with the blind date being lots of fun! Don't see how they could have kept their relationship a secret from Mark and especially Casey for a year though.

NOPE, but a very nice fuck fest! I would have a hard time marrying Julie.....she is prime for cheating IF lover boy slows down with more age...

What kind of skank slut fucks on the first date??? brags on her whoring ability???

Great little story where the April Fools Day jokes don't actually harm anyone emotionally or otherwise. ~ Just once,back when I was dating I wish my date had said to me, "Okay handsome, let's go up to my place and fuck!" ~ (Great line by the beautiful,sexy,foul-mouthed red head who was the star of this story!) ~ I've read this one a number of times and it's one of my favorites on Literotica! ~ 5 ~

There is no doubt a man will fuck a woman who has treated him like shit for years, but he'd never have a relationship with her, he already knows she has no respect for him

One of my favorite Literotica stories,short but oh so sweet. “A girl can’t very well say,’let’s go to my place and fuck’…” is an all-time great date line! / Must have read this story 10 times and it never gets old! / ~5+~

Very good enjoyable short story. Right on the mark.