by rockandroller
Great stuff. Please continue with this as a series!! It has so much potential.
This story was comparatively pale and I voted a 5 on the other one. If I had read this one earlier, I would have voted this one a 5. However now I am voting it a 4.
This story is not that hot.
Although others have said that the story is a little tame and in some ways i agree, I think it is a really good launch platform for a series, with scope for fun in lots of different directions.
the title says it all! I really enjoyed this story! made me want to be back on my high school team. if I knew then what I know now...
~E in CT, USA