All Comments on 'This Old House Ch. 03'

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Pope1944Pope1944over 5 years ago
Well done!

It's a great story. Can't wait to see what else is in the tunnels.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 5 years ago
Just read all three.

What a great story.

And having Adele Stephens picture in my mind really helped imagining them together.

I've loved her since way back.

Eagerly waiting for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Very Inspiring

Just finished the chapter and am very eager for the next. The extreme graphic writing is very inspiring to be able to visualize the participants. Please hurry with the next chapter.

ender2k2kender2k2kover 5 years ago
Great story

The couple is hot and the story is very interesting. What more could you want. Except for chapter four of course. Thanks and Happy New Year.

Comentarista82Comentarista82over 5 years ago
Incredible...

...climax in so many ways! I so enjoy how they now love each other and fully connect after al the prior events with researching and searching for answers. Now they've found each other. Well done! 5

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Great story line, but.......

Sex should compliment a story not dominate it. You seem to get lost trying to come up with reasons to describe a sex scene. The truth is most of it has been said before and becomes repetitive. I'm sorry but I'm done

GhostwalkerGhostwalkerabout 5 years agoAuthor
To Anonymous:

I guess you've never had the pleasure of a 'bedroom weekend'. This chapter is based, in part, on a weekend my wife and I spent together just after we'd started dating. It was just fortunate there was room service at the resort we stayed at or we'd have been VERY hungry since we never left the room.

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