All Comments on 'Waiting'

*****What a dry story that the only reason my eyes are tearing up!! What a great read. Thanks for sharing.

My favorite E.E. Cummings also. "somewhere i have never travelled, gladly beyond any experience..."

Thank you for reminding me.

Beautiful!

5

Superlative. So true. 5 & fave.

Outstanding.

Been there, done that. Nicely done

Thanks for writing

Magnificent!

My daughter gave birth to her daughter during the big covid shutdown, so I couldn't be in the waiting room, otherwise, this was a story straight from my own life. Thanks for sharing.

A wonderful read, full of vivid imagery, and emotion. Love!

Omg that was so powerful. I wasn’t able to be in the hospital when my granddaughter was born getting only a few text as progress was made. And now she is the most amazing mother. I loved your story, it made me feel all warm inside.

I neglected to say that it was a marvelous story. *****

"She gathered words like flowers" That line alone is worth the read.

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Great...

No words can describe parents love for child...

You can't love anyone more than your child.... Naturally

Not only the humans but each and every living creature

Loving the words you choose to make it live

Rated max allowed

Not a very erotic story that stands out, because it speaks about things that matter, it creates emotions, it feels genuine. 5 from me.

That was pretty intense! Well written.

They grow up so quick, it seems like yesterday my grandson was 10 or 12 and here he was graduating HS last Friday the off to Hawaii to celebrate! Good story.

38 years ago my twin sons were born. 22 years ago I watched them play for and win a state championship. Last Saturday I watched 2 grandsons play for and win a state championship on the same field. Their mom wore their dads Jersey from the years before. I have Granddaughters in high school, the years go fast

Going to walk my daughter down the aisle in a few months. And lately I’ve found myself going back over many of those same memories. Rocking her, reading stories, puddle-jumping. Darn allergies…

Exceptional, you've captured what being dad to our little girls regardless of age, perfectly

You wrote a gem in so few words!