All Comments on 'When Worlds Collide Ch. 10'

Wow you have built the tension beautifully and the meeting was everything I had hoped for and more! Can't wait for the next chapter to be posted! Congrats Jaz thankyou for the quick post of this chapter!

Willie

mooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeee

I was wondering why it was such a big deal that Rafe and Lacey mated and now i know. :) Good job.

Wow what a chapter. Such tension, such drama ... amazing. You are truly a master of the build up. Well done Jaz. Can't wait for the next one!!!

I am so enthralled with your characterization for each person in your story. I am sighing simply because I'll be so sad when this ends. I love it so much. I would love something to happen to make the vampires respect the Werewolves more. I think old Wolves should be nasty too. Rafe is a main character, hehe I want him to be able to kick vampire ass. I am hoping Lacey gets to bite gaves face off.

Scurvydog

Its almost time! Wow. . I'm anxiously waitin for the next chapter now. . I loved Caleb's reaction to children:) It kind of reminded me of Eric from True Blood except Eric was fascinated by the mini humans lol. . . Oh and see why I love Demitri? *wink wink* Just saying. . Fantastic chapter Jaz.

...the highly anticipated fight is here!!!!! LOL at Caleb being an uncle to the pups. Thx for the update.

oooh what a nice build up, can't wait to read the battle scene. who will kill graves? hmmm the tension

Laughing vampires and laughing wolves... I just knew Graves was going to spoil the fun for everyone.

Another great one and I'm literally on the edge of my seat...

This is sooooooo good! I don't trust those twins and can't wait to see them get theirs. Not to mention Graves. Oh, especially that sicko! Jaz, you're awesome!

this story has to be one of your best efforts ever. Has me hanging on the edge of my seat. Your characters and their actions are so believable it is scary. My only worry is that I know someone has to die in this one and I love them all and get teary eyed thinking of who it is gonna be. thanks for continuing to share you awesome talent with us

Kate

can't wait for the next chapter, excellent work on this one, i still dislike the twins, not really sure why but i do.

Donna

I'd really like to see a story (or 2) about them. Let them meet someone. =D

Jazzy!!! You complete me and you had me at Hello!! Im already looking forward to your next story!! Your writting is just SICK!!!!

Jaz, the sadness of the good-byes and the tension of the vampire meeting made for a great read. I am a hexed (grandmother's assessment) insomniac doing my happy dance an 1:30 am. I have many, this one looks like a pee-pee dance since I can't wait for the upcoming war :-) One note, when Caleb enters and stares at Rafe, he grabs Lacey's hand. The next paragraph then has him sitting...so it reads that he was standing and took her hand. Well maybe my brain processed it that way, and one capitalization error. As #1 fan I just thought I'd let you know.

Shell

Excellent writing and tension.

Yes! This story is so awesome! I would loooooooove it if one of the twins ended up being mated to, oh... Cedar? I can't wait for the rest of the story, and I will be crestfallen once it ends. You're too good at what you do, you know that?

Yay Jazz... this is awesome! Good lead up to the battle, got read of a couple of niggling problems and made me cry when Millie had to go.

I got a theory thou that one of those twins is working for Graves... just a hunch, probably wrong but something isn't right there. Can't wait the next chapter and admire for attempting a battle like this - good luck!!

Amazing chapter! a little shorter than the others but amazing none the less. Please write a story about the twins next, one could mate with cedar or another female were. Really love you're stories! plz plz plz consider the twins in another story possibly set when milz gives birth? i wish i had your talent! soooo jelous. hurry with the next chapters!

Lost Chicken I am in total agreement with you there Graves has got to have something on one of them.

Great chapter Jazz it rally set the scene well. Can't wait to see the next chapter hun xxxxxx

Sol (jazz' Groupie)

To those who like the idea of twins + were, oh I can see that. Picture it now, a little rough sex, a little biting, a funeral. No, actually I can't see it happening.

I'm a little surprised at how over-matched the were are against vampires, but then, I suppose there are more were than vamps.

I'm betting on Demetri getting Greaves.

If the twins are on Grieve's side, it would be Andrei I think. He seemed like the better of the two when he was introduced but it seems he is the quieter one you have to worry about. Alexei is the time to act. He's the thinker of the two, the planner. As usual I am very impressed with you. You handled the others leaving beautifully, making us feel the desperation they had at being split from one another. Demetri's bad ass ways are awesome. You really made us feel the tension in the meeting too. You have a way of really bringing your story to life. You draw me in and make me feel like I am there watching it happen. You really need to get this published! Can't wait for the next chapter :) It will be exciting to see what Graves has been planning this whole time since we haven't heard from him. Jaz, glad I'm done reading so I can sleep tonight. lol

It is only the vamp venom that is lethal to the were not the blood so there is no reason Lacey can't rip out Graves's throat out! LOL Mating the twins to weres could be a little delicate as they tend to bite when they peak so to speak. LOL

As for future stories well Jaz, Mara has yet to be changed, Cedar still needs a mate! Hint,hint.

I didn't see it until now! Excellent chapter! Tension is thick, emotions are high! Got to go read the next chapter, right now! So glad I don't have to wait!

I have read all of your work on this site, and have become really attached to the characters in this series. They are all so likeable and everything is almost set up perfectly, if it weren't for that pesky Graves, but he certainly is a good villain. I love the drama and struggle that is taking place. All the egos clashing together with the love of the women to balance them out. I really like your writing style and I am looking forward to reading where you take this story next. I know there are already two more chapters posted as I write this comment, but I wanted to take the opportunity to say that everyone loves a happy ending and I'm really hoping for one in this story. I totally trust your judgement and direction in this, and I think you have an awesome tallent for engrossing the reader. I certainly have invested my interest in it. Thank you.

...Rafe's anger at not being able to defeat Graves himself. No man wants to think that his woman's former lover is better than him in any way. Rafe having to swallow the fact that Graves would tear him limb from limb has to be a very hard pill to swallow.

I am concerned about the twins loyalty. There is something about them that just sends off warning bells in my head.

HE'S THE BADDEST VAMP EVER!!! The twins are intriguing to me but out of the three stories I've read so far, DEMETRI is the Best!!! :D

I would never want to meet him if he was a real person, but I sure do love is cocky asshole ways

"I think he'd have a better chance of answering you if you weren't crushing his throat, Demetri,"...best line ever...LOL!

I know a special group of SEALs Demetri would fit in well with, Soft enough to play tea cups with a 3 year old one moment, and double tap someone their task to kill in the next :)))

Lol I love demitri's arrogance and twisted sense of humor. I'm not so sure I like the twins tho they seem a little bit too closed minded for me. Oh boy the war.... I'm nervous about what's gonna happen

Wow!!!!! Such tension, but here comes the action!!!

thought I was in love with Rafe lol but Demetri sure is growing on me ;) love his bad ass attitude and his asshole ways ...hmmm what does that say about me? lol

*sigh* Demetri :)) Can I have him?? Such a good job portraying the dynamics of each group and couple... love it.

at first I did not like him, but he has sort of reminded me of a more pronounced version of the god loki, violent and pranksterish. He is almost like a child when he is violent, almost innocent in it; but at the same time a cruel and heartless monster. He loves to wind people up and then act so innocent. I think he is becoming my favorite character in your stories.

can vampires have children in this series?

AAAAHHHHHHH!!!! every time i read this it just gets more and more amazing!!:)

..is killing me. The battle is about to begin and I'm certainly going to get around to reading chapter 11 a lot faster than I did this one and the last. :)

why are these werewolves so much weaker than normal. Vamps have extra powers, but physical strength should favor the were. In a fight, it would be an even match. Not being critical, just wondering. Over all it is an excellent story