All Comments on 'Who Would've Guessed Ch. 01'

A sensational start, please continue.

Ditto.

Hahaha keep it’s goid

Great. Keep them coming.

Great start to hopefully a long series

More please!

Would have given 10 stars!

One of the best stories I've read on this site. Excellent characters, I felt I understood them both completely. And it was sexy AF. Can't wait for more.

Incredible story. Always had a love for the outcast and the popular girl type stories. Praying Ch.2 is being planned or is already in the works. Thanks for the great story!

Excellent!!

Trusting this will be one of many of Cory's sexual adventures.

Well done how you changed the tutor to Sam.

Great story and can definitely use more chapters.

Keep this story going.. Can't wait to read how they will act tomorrow at school!!!!

Is this gonna be an origin story? is he gonna slowly become dominant like your other characters?

Wow this is good literotica!

I really like how authenticity and honesty is often misconstrued as awkwardness, and it naturally stops honest shy people from expressing themselves.

Of course, I came to this story for the erotica, but I stayed because of the character development. Hope you continue it!

More please!

This is a great start to something that seems like it will develop into something greater! Keep it up!

What a fantastic story, thank you for sharing! What I absolutely enjoyed and appreciated most was the author’s significant focus and attention allotted towards character development. Having just finished reading a long multi chapter story in which multiple participants jumped from one sexcapade to the next without much explanation regarding each character’s history or shared relationships. This story captured my attention from the very beginning and gripped it tightly until the very end.

You put together something that is so sweet, cute, sad, sexy, funny and incredibly hot and you managed to do it so it comes off as natural with characters that seem real. Very impressive and a hell of a lot of fun to read. Undoubtedly one of the better stories I have come across and I can’t wait to continue to enjoying this wonderful piece of storytelling.

Lexx

Excellent new entry in the "Hung Shy Nerd" ugly duckling subgenre.

@Egglime Don't you dare drop this storyline unfinished!

Whoa, this story is supremely hot. Thank you !

You really, really, REALLY need to write another chapter Egglime. This could turn out to be one of the best stories of its category here at Literotica.

Please get those creative juices flowing and deliver us with more about these two and their friends!

Why do so many writers abandon their highest rated '01' stories after one episode and go back to trying new ideas?

So...did he pull it out?

Please author one more chapter

This was outstanding! My first time reading this author’s work & im totally impressed. A full 5 stars for a unique story.

Bill S.