All Comments on 'Wire-Pulling Pt. 01'

I had the benefit of tiny tim being fully completed when I read it. This infuriates me lol. Seriously though, I like the premise and it’s good to see some of the characters again. Please don’t wait 5 months for the next part 😂

@NovemberComingFire This one's completed too. I just need time to convert it into something I can submit. Converting the first four chapters (what is posted right now) took me a little over an hour...

I don't want to read a book . Get to the point.

Excellent. Yes, it is slow building, but you warned us. It also has back-story, character development, a sympathetic protagonist, nuanced allies and believable antagonists. The abuse is tough to read about, but sadly, I have seen women make bad choices in men, just so that the choice would be their own, frequently jumping from a bad situation to a worse one.

Please continue this. From the comments before me, there is a prequel of sorts. Where can we find it. Also thanks for a superior read.

thanks for the chapter

Excellent story. Very well written.

By far one of the best stories I’ve read on here! Eagerly waiting for the next part. Will keep an eye on your page to see if it gets posted today!

Also, I see that there’s a part 1 with Tim, should we read it first or is this a standalone?

Well this one has a promise of intrigue, investigative and active genius, intriguing action enfolding, bringing a corrupted and self-centered atypical (u.s.) lead figure to a fall...and justice?

Great so far, but please refrain from introducing anal and (submissive) name calling, 4 letter words (ie slut, cunt etc. etc....) in the narrative. The preceding is not sexy at all! A truly Loving and Bonding between mother and son will mean so much more, something I myself has pined for forever....

Thank You, great for a perceived 'first' submission, No way this is a novice first attempt.

Too long, too slow moving, no real connection to the son. Anderson is a better character, better connection to him.

Should stop writing this story and write something else. I won't be reading any more of this story.

Enjoyed reading this. It has a great story. Looking forward to more

That was... uncomfortably real. Thanks for sharing!

Excellent story. Things like this take time, though I hope it is not months. Please ignore the first anon. The portmanteau, he probably doesn't know what that means, Literotica, means literature and erotica. There are many of us out here who do in fact prefer both. We do not wish to see how many times one can squeeze fuck, dick, cunt, and cum, into a single sentence, which seems to be his preference.

You even told us it was a slow burn, not wall to wall sex, and the heat would be more prevelant in upcoming chapters. Yet he read it anyway and said he didn't want to read a book. I'd say that's an understatement. Probably not much book reading goes on in his basement.

Also, as someone else stated, it appears there's a prequel to this, focusing on Tim. Where might we find such an offering?

I eagerly await future chapters. 5/5 stars.

Dewey Cheatham

To answer two questions I have been asked over the past few days:

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1. Wire-Pulling is completely written up. It's actually a book I had published for quite some time and now decided to put on here. I just need some time to convert it into something Literotica's submission process accepts.

I already submitted Part Two. After I submitted Part One, it took eleven days for the admins to approve it. Since it's just as long as Part One, though, I expect the approval process to be another eleven days. Maybe I'm lucky, though.

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2. Some people asked about the Tim story.

To make it short: It's not on Literotica. It wouldn't get past the admins if I tried, so I won't. If you want, you can follow the link in my Bio to find it. However, both stories, Wire-Pulling and "Tiny Tim", are stand-alone stories in a series, with the third book in the works. You don't have to read "Tiny Tim" for Wire-Pulling to make sense, and vice versa.

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Hope you're all having a great week!

Actually I enjoyed tiny tim and this chapter so much that I went ahead and bought this one. You’ve earned it!

I read the comment about a story starring Tim? Where is that?

It’s good 👍

You should put something about the dom/sub nature of the story in the tags. Very slow paced and not very erotic at this point. Zero affection.

Boring but this category will give 5 stars to anything