All Comments on 'Yellow Fever Ch. 03'

I wondered how she was going to get payback. Good chapter, a thoroughly enjoyable read. Is there more?

The turnabout was so hot. The power she took back for herself, and then the question at the end, just enough to tug at the heartstrings. Thank you for this read.

it was okay but compared to your last series not as good. she should give him a chance

I read your entire Intruder series as you uploaded chapter by the chapter, and I loved it!

I love this story as well, but this part is really special, non-consent and impregnation story from a totally different point of view, and so hot!

Don't leave it there, if the bad guy in your other story can become a good guy, why can't this one ? And that question at the end ? That shows that there is Hope and a Good Guy is in there.

Loved the way she took control. I would love for her to visit him again

I thought she was going to cut his balls off, if I had been her that is what I would have done. Hope she was on the pill for that last insertion.

Wow! Is another baby to follow te first?

Barepusslover

i must have part 4 soon. will she get pregnant again? will he be a part of his kids life and hers? i must know?!

Loved seeing her turn the tables on her rapist. Paybacks are a bitch. He got off easier than she did. He did rape her twice so if she becomes pregnant by him again it serves him right. Plus her children would be biological siblings. I do think there is more that could be written but if you do not write more at least I am satisfied she got to him to pay, both financially and ego wise.

For various reasons I find the Yellow Fever stories both very sexy and a little disturbing. I love the Yellow Fever series for both the emotions it inspires in me.

I love how this story was so different in its ending than that of "The Intruder". As if to suffice the commenters who couldn't handle Leah & John's story ending. Loved this! Sad to see you're no longer posting. I hope you endeavours in school and everything else in life for has gone amazingly well for you!

All the best! Xoxoxo

Harley Quinn. (Seriously, that's my name!)

Fucked up, imaginative, and complex. Nice job.

I will start by saying I'm a pretty ordinary white guy who really loves Asian women, and in my mind there isn't anything hotter on this planet.

So I had a very hard time reading through all the abuse and rape of our heroine, but I kept reading as I wanted to know how she got revenge on her rapist, and I have to say you surprised me, I really haven't seen her getting revenge that way, but I loved it...

Michael R.

Just gonna pretend this chapter doesn't exist

its a good story but needs a good final chapter

As a fellow Asian woman, I love this chapter very much! Love how the tables turned

5 stars. rape is never to be condoned, too much floating around for free. but have to high five the way she got her revenge. couldn't stop reading.

Oh My!

My favorite chapter out the series by far…..Specifically for the fact that she got her payback & totally dominated him. Pheww I don’t smoke but I could definitely use a cigarette after that powerful orgasm I got after reading this lol

Well done & 5stars indeed!

I enjoyed the first two parts and had my doubts about how the victim would suddenly seek justice. But this turned out to be a very good read. I really liked the femdom and how the female character controlled the entire sequence of event. Now I'm having a hard time deciding if I like her more as a submissive rape victim or a devious dominant!

I love that the MC in Yellow Fever was a strong Asian woman.

I had a long relationship with one (it ended because she couldn't be faithful) so I know the demure stereotype is just that.

Please write more like this.

Five stars!