All Comments on 'A Happy Holly Daye'

by BrettJ

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Sid0604Sid0604over 9 years ago
Thank you...

I enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Thank you

For making a black heroine who is not a size 18. It seems that everyone writes about the black girl with "thick thighs", a "fat ass",has some "extra pounds" or is "bigger around the middle". Your heroine is one of the few that I have read that appears to be in the single digits. Thanks. We are not all chunky. I would say,though,that she is kind of a slut,but since you outright stated the white chick was a slut too,I cannot be too offended.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Easy 5* fuck fest

romance NOT! and with a past college working whore. I can see marriage bells coming to this idiot and slut....LOL!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Enjoyable

Enjoyable nonsense. A little light relief in a drab world. Many thanks.

Just one little niggle, something is either unique or it isn't. You can't have "very unique" or "quite unique".

Oh & I loved the way she left her boots on. Cheers.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Another gem! Short & sweet. ~5~

maxsteelemaxsteelealmost 2 years ago

Hoping you do a sequel as this was amazing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

THIS TRASH IS NOT ROMANCE, MORE LIKE EROTIC COUPLING

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Don't listen to the haters... I love it!!

SatyrDickSatyrDick12 months ago

[24.05.23]

Fun, Zsexsay, Hawt, a bit Romantique!

11/10!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Where is the rest of the story. You just got it started. I am so disappointed. So far, five stars, lets go for ten.

SatyrDickSatyrDick28 days ago

[07.04.24]

I forgot to mention in my comment from 24th May last year, I like the fact you used 'Spencer' as a woman's name.

My name is Spencer and I used to count Spencers that I met IRL (got up to about 200) and met about a 1/2 dozen females named Spencer - including one in a stroller (about 4 y.o.) in line when I sold tix at a theme park, after meeting a black grandfather (older gent) named Spencer.

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