All Comments on 'A Submissive Journey Ch. 02'

by BrettJ

Sort by:
  • 2 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Hot!!!

I find a lot of erotic stories written by men so horribly unrealistic from the woman's point of view. This one, though far fetched, is hot, hot, hot!

RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyover 18 years ago
Wow

I thought this was great, you still worked the angle of the commitment to both couples and even with his "cruel" looks and sounds, respect and devotion still showed. This was another hot story, and you'll need to hurry with part 3 or I will have to hunt you and your co-author down and shoot you!!!!

Red

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous