All Comments on 'An Unusual Marriage'

This is a wonderful story. Hot and erotic.

Keep it cumming i loved the story

This story would work better, and make more sense, if you added a mind control element.

Nice one. And what made it better, she was actually willing. I've read non-con incest before, it totally sucked so I dropped the series P.D.Q.

I rather enjoyed the idea of this tale, but wow; this sort of things is what an insane episode of the "Twilight Zone" would be dealing with: for crying out loud, Kristen is Shelly's stepmom, she didn't birth her, but she's her mom now, so she's got to act like it and stop trying to mate with her daughter-by-marriage!

Mind you, the idea of the perverted stepmom is a common enough touch in fairy-tales, but this takes the whole concept to a radically different level altogether: the lesbian stepmom is a better way to word it in this; but she's also more of a pervert, as she's Shelly's mom now- so she has no business trying to seduce her stepdaughter!

Loved the story overall, but really and truly hated the conduct of that pair of ladies, and "ladies" is used loosely here due to their conduct with oneanother.

Sincerely one of your hopefully many fans;

Nurek.