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by BrettJ

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Not bad at all!

You finished the story as if you were on a deadline and you'd just remembered it. Take more time to pace things. A second chapter would have been merited with the daughters "cumming out" party.

symtronsymtronover 10 years ago
OMG I can't hardly wait

I have favorited you and will be looking for the next story....excellent buildup and really good writing (IMHO) Congrats you've a winner here...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good story. Very enjoyable and has a really good lead in to the next chapter (if there ever is one)..

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