All Comments on 'Jesse, Anya and Paul'

that would be alsome if you would allow pixe to become pregant

as long as you donn't let it affect their relationship and ruin the "marriage". Bringing Pixie into the marriage as a full partner could be a good way to solve the dilema. Well written and even if others didn't like some aspects of the story, I thought it was pretty good.

...but it could use more talking among the characters as they fuck and are fucked and suck and are sucked. Pixie should be more intelligent, too, not just an M/F Lolita. Let's hear her scream, "Fuck me harder!" Or something like that. These people are too much like machines. I want to hear some moaning and gasping and squishy sounds too!

Edelle in Sacramento