Lucky Man Ch. 23

It seems like aspects of the story are taking an ugly turn. Kelly seems to be unable to say no, and it’s as if she’s blindly going forward. I don’t know if it’s still the rebellious aspect, or perhaps an addiction to the sense of liberation, maybe mixed in with the thrill of being in the spotlight. Whatever it is, it’s clear that her thinking has become self-centered. Duncan seems to have come to the end of his wawnt of exploration. It’s like he’s going along with whatever others want of him. He’s a good guy, supportive, caring, and tolerant. That he’s noticing some issues is definitely a big red flag and I think he’s making a mistake in pushing those feelings away. I know this is fiction, but realisitcally, this situation is well on it’s way to imploding. I think Duncan’s saving grace is Kara. What is a little worrisome is that noone has broached the subject of what home life is going to be like with a baby in the mix. It seems likely that Kara and Duncan will gravitate more closely together, providing a healthy environment for a child to be raised. That will mean that the house can no longer be orgy central for whoever decides to wander in. I think both Duncan and Kara can handle and provide that, and I think they will end up with the quality of relationship that Duncan should have ultimately had with Kelly. — I don’t think it’s going to turn out well for Kelly, and as much as I like Duncan’s character, he should have the sense to reel Kelly in.

One other thing, I like Connor. I think that he might help move Kelly forward in her pursuit of her inner slut.

Great writing, as usual!! ANAL - finally, I thought that maybe that would be part of Duncan’s fantasy. I really hope this becomes part of Kelly’s regular repertoire. Back to the great writing, it is so well written that you have people psycho analyzing characters in a Literotica story. Way to go. I think some of the other commentators are looking for a return of the Kelly and Duncan from chapter 1. You cannot put the genie back in the bottle. I love that this story tells how shy Kelly, the virgin bride, became a hardcore slut. She went from blushing saying penis to swearing like a sailor. She went from shy, to showing her off, to cam/porn star. She went from hating giving blowjobs to loving them above all else. She went from not swallowing to “accidentally” swallowing Mark, to loving the taste, (I think it was Duncan who said it was the most intimate act a woman can do). She went from being shocked that Marie was having sex with her boss to screwing her boss, Marie’s boss and anything that moved in the office. She went from anal - “not my honey!!” To letting Mark and Drake take turns without even mentioning it to Duncan or Kara. I think anal will be the same way, hopefully she loves it and her next gangbang will be airtight. I think that her ultimate end will be for her and Danielle to move to California and do porn full time. As for our Lucky Man, Duncan, he gets a redo. Kara becomes his new wife and mother of his children. They are surprised when the are watching Kelly’s most recent porn, Ariel Gangbang 1, she does ten guys. They still meet with the Saturday group, but only a couple of times a year. And, Kara only does other women and usually with Duncan in a three way. They still see Kelly and Danielle a couple of time per year, when they are passing through as feature dancers at the local strip club. The latest time through, Kelly let’s them preview her most recent title, Ariel’s Airtight Gangbang 37. Duncan gets a fairly normal family and Kelly gets to release her inner slut. Love it.

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The reintroduction of this Connor dweeb was a big misstep for this pretty great tale. Some pissant kid goes from virgin to sex god in a matter of weeks? Then is able to use a mature caring grown man's wife whenever and however he wants? I mean Duncan was a fool to nurture it but still the whole premise rings false to me. Thank god for Kara a truly caring individual and her reemergence to the main storyline was very welcome as a counterpoints to Kelly's boorish and uncaring behavior.

I read the post hattrick88 made three times, each time I thought more on points he made. I must agree with his analysis. Kelly could very well be diagnosed with a psychological disorder. Whether this is a form of OCD where her psych requires her to take care of any she feels need to be cared for (In any way as shown by her early need to be the person taking care of friends by doing the cooking without help and such to random sexual encounters) just as the 'crazy cat lady' feels she must take in and care for any cat she sees. Or it could be the result of 'programming' her parents ultra religious put her through as their idea of a proper servant of God. Anyone who has read or seen programs about how deeply a person can be conditioned can see this possibility. The one possibility that it might be is one that could be the hardest to figure out how to handle. Early on I felt the direction Kelly was pointed was that of a submissive. Her statements and actions kept pointing to her wanting/needing Duncan to control her. Things like her insisting Duncan choose her clothing, or expose her in some way of his choosing, not hers. I admit I could be way wrong but some how it feels right. The path forward feels like Duncan will need to reign in his wife and become her Dom. Perhaps not in a blatant way but more along the lines of making her go back to needing his approval for all things sexual. His job needs to be like the governor on an engine or the control rods in a reactor. The engine and reactor can continue to operate within prescribed parameters but when limits are reached the governor throttles back and the control rods get inserted to damp down the reactions.