by BrettJ
Nice short story. And there's nothing wrong with a quick little story. The potential is there for at least another chapter.
I enjoyed it all in all.
Your first paragraph said that the wife left the father for another man. Later on, you say that she died...which one is it? Either way, nice story. I'd like to see where this goes.
Guess he said she died 'cos it felt like when she left him. Anyway, a typically great story.
Lukas