All Comments on 'Motivating Daddy'

by BrettJ

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
measurements are immaterial

Nice short story. And there's nothing wrong with a quick little story. The potential is there for at least another chapter.

I enjoyed it all in all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
So...did she die or did she leave him?

Your first paragraph said that the wife left the father for another man. Later on, you say that she died...which one is it? Either way, nice story. I'd like to see where this goes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Daddy

Guess he said she died 'cos it felt like when she left him. Anyway, a typically great story.

Lukas

Horny_Mungo2Horny_Mungo2almost 18 years ago
nice

Nice and funny peace. I like it.

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