All Comments on 'Natalia's Naughty Daddy Ch. 05'

by BrettJ

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Delicious

Aw, Brett... Thank you, Sweetheart. It was truly, deviantly delicious as all of your work tends to be. :) Cannot wait for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
what a strange ending!

I hope it is not the end chapter, as beginning suggested this had only been added on base of request. Well this woman wants you to tie up the ends with Sylvia and Tally! You can;t leave me in the lurch!!! Sofi x

blueyedbobblueyedbobover 11 years ago
this was written in '08!!!

and nothing since,,,,what a disappointment,,,,,it was traveling so well too!!! really expected many more fire works from this serial!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More, more, more!

You stopped writing! You simply MUST finish this! He absolutely must get his daughter and his girl friend preggers!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Please continue this story

I love reading your work and after reading this I just have to know what you would come up with for these characters.

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