by BrettJ
love ya work. really liked part 1 and part 2 was just as good. liked sherri she was hot too. Keep up the good work. part 3?
Wow you have done it again Brett, fucking sucking wonderful. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc's UK
Wow, great so far. Too bad, you haven't posted more of this story. I would love to see more of that harem-outfit and chains stuff, perhaps you can throw in some maid's outfits for Whitney. ;-) :-D
As before, this story is too short, there's miles more distance in this story.
Please, please, please write more chapters to this and some of the other single or double chapter stories you've written over the years.
PLEASE !
As others have said, you need to re-visit Whitney and her situation...
Lots of potential for (a report)/ many reports of what happened for the rest of the year and even beyond. These two chapters have been very readable and I am so glad that we don't have to sit and try to translate gibberish into English as in less well written pieces as we sometimes find here.
Please, if at all possible, continue the story ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !