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He went to Kara's room next but saw that she was sleeping. Tiptoeing quietly in, he tucked the blanket up around her a bit, then kissed her gently on the forehead.
"I love you," she whispered, smiling and not opening her eyes.
"I love you," he replied, kissing her a final time before turning and heading to his own room.
- COMMENTS
rbloch664 months agoI’ve been reading this series steady for the past 4-5 days. For the most part, the story gets far over-shadowed by the sex scenes. The only saving grace on that is that some of them are different enough to remain interesting. There are a lot of characters in this series, almost too many to keep track of. Doing this has cost you the opportunity to develop any characters to a meaningful level. This has turned into the Disneyland of sex. The dynamic between Kelly and Duncan was cool at first. Now I just keep reading to find out where it all implodes and causes good people to get hurt. All I see happening at this point is Kelly continuing her sexploration unchecked, and in the end it will irreversibly hurt her marriage. Duncan will be devastated but will end up ok. Everybody loves him. But I definitely can see Kelly flying off the rails. Quitting her job and doing modeling and Cam shows is only going to get her interested in doing porn. I don’t see things ending well.
vanyeover 1 year agoI know that Kara is in the last episode, as it were, but I do think you're pacing is somewhat off here. You make a big points of how she feels about Kelly and Duncan, and then completely ignore it for over two chapters. It really did make it feel like it was an afterthought. I look forward to seeing what else is coming, but in the future I think you really need to plan that kind of stuff out better.
Spike1969almost 2 years agoI hope you are feeling better. I really enjoy your writing. It is so filled with details and back story. I know others seem to have found it off putting, but I love how slow this story has built up. I know it is just fantasy; but, I’m not a huge fan of incest, except for maybe sisters, which makes this story perfect. I enjoyed Little White Lies; but, I like this series better. I probably won’t read the others. At the beginning of this chapter when Kelly had three of the guy the morning after and Duncan walked in, I thought she was going to be airtight. I know that you haven’t shied away from anal. I hope that you expand Kelly’s repertoire to really enjoying anal. Hope all is well. Best wishes.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoA super sized husband and his nymphomaniac wife have a live-in sex slave and a married couple (who are cops no less) that they lead around by a leash and offer them to others for sex. They periodically have an orgy with others where all the guys (who would normally be the ones to try to seduce and/or beg women for sex) simply have to show up and a dozen women literally crawl around to each of them eager to suck and fuck them multiple times. In what universe does this ever happen?
